Phân tích bài mẫu chủ đề Ideal society – IELTS Writing task 2
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Task question: Throughout history, people have dreamed of living in a perfect society, but they have not agreed on what an ideal society would be like. What do you think is the most important element of a perfect society in the modern world? How can people work towards achieving an ideal society.
Essay plan
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Sample
People have different perceptions of an ideal society. Throughout the history of humankind, many notions have been suggested, yet none appears to be all agreed upon. From my perspective, a perfect society consists in mutual understanding between people, and in order for such a utopia to be attained, it is advisable that people commence practicing inner understanding, after which tolerance and sympathy towards others should be honed.
My definition of a perfect society is one where people, regardless of race, ethnicity, and background, unconditionally love one another without hostility and hatred. The most important attribute of such a society, therefore, is the affinity between people. Animosity, the major flaw that hinders us from having an ideal society, have their roots from irrational contempt for others without actually going through difficulties and incidents their kind might face. Therefore, by seeing the world from the eyes of others, we are able to truly understand each other’s hardship, thereby obliterating hatred and giving rise to an Arcadia where people all live in harmony.
To contribute to building a perfect world, each person should practice understanding ourselves. Seeing that human beings have flaws and eventually accepting them is the first step towards attaining intrapersonal joy. Not blaming yourselves too much, seeking personal solace whenever you have problems, and learning from your mistakes are efficient ways of inner understanding. After the inner soul is embraced, compassion towards others should be acquired. Putting oneself in others’ situations, showing simple acts of kindness and actively communicating with others can create an endless ripple of empathy that reaches out to everyone.
In conclusion, I opine that the most important element leading to a perfect society is mutual understanding. Loving ourselves and loving others are the two simple yet efficient ways of building such a society. Although it is highly unlikely that such a utopia will become existent in our lifetime, as John Lennon’s wise words, ‘you may say I’m a dreamer, but I’m not the only one’, we can always pray and hope and try our very best, and eventually, the miracle might happen one day.
Vocabulary highlights
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